Presentation Two : Week Six

This was really exciting to share, especially as we were adamant our piece would be for one and here it was for two groups of four. By the end of this day there was definitely a sense of achievement, but also more direction in what we needed to do.

Feedback

– Delays are too long however we were good at leaving enough time for audience process which is important.

– We should only do one journey (we agreed and cut my journey which at this point was barely a thought)

– Key advice was to use a more imperative tone within the audio to ensure the audience do what we need them to. More clarity on distance and pace.

– The lack of clarity about Conor’s persona worked, and leaves our piece open to many interpretations.

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